[quote=Shadowcatcher]
thank you very much! okay, you can take another look at it.i edited her history to take out the jinchuriki bits and gave her a more general rason for being cast out, and i also took out most of her lightning jutsu. i kept the custom ones because i feel like they arent too powerful really. they are just manipulated tools soo...now what do you guys think?edit: also found a cool looking villiage symbol we could use.
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Looks better to me. That said, Chidori is a jutsu that hasn't even been invented yet? I'll let the GMs tell you what they want on that, but looks a lot better. At least to me.