Let me be clear. I do not care about profanity at all. I hate censorship. The problem with 'what the fuck' is that it is an anachronism. It's a modern phrase and, though I could be wrong, I don't think I've ever heard anyone say anything like it in this setting. 'By Andraste's Tits' yes but 'what the fuck' no. 

Other than that the post is written fine. The only problem you might encounter now is that you've thrown your character into a scene with two others when you might not be able to post for a while which means you might bottleneck the scene. I would have tried to hand her off to another PC or an NPC healer, but it's not that big of a problem. We can wait.