Wow, you really put effort into it. Looks good, your character is now double accepted. The only thing you didn't describe are her elemental spells, but i'm sure you'll treat those reasonably, and otherwise i can always call you out on it. One thing though, you talked about space distortion in the Astra Planeti, but its function isn't completely clear to me. Does it just decrease the power of incoming attacks, like an extra defensive measure? Or does it do anything else as well?