Stefan0620: Looking good so far. I'd say that it's good enough to be accepted. Derpestein: Finally, someone who isn't American or Chinese! :D Marik: And speaking of which... Anyway, I've read through your CS. It looks well developed so far, except for a few things. 'Specialist' is too ambiguous a rank, unless of course, it's an actual rank in T.A.G. I'm going to need clarification on this. But then this is only the simplest part. Regarding your character's loadout, I'm going to need a little more elaboration on the submachinegun. As you know, there are a lot of different models of SMGs in the world, so I need you to pick one. It doesn't even have to be real. I mean, 6 years should be enough for a few new models to be designed, field-tested and distributed. And the final bit has wider implications. You mentioned in your character's story that T.A.G was dismantled, yet in your character's history of combat deployments, T.A.G would go on to conduct operations in multiple countries. Is there a mistake there? Also, don't worry about not being able to use the Katana. Assuming that your character lives long enough, there might be opportunities for that, and since we're dealing with aliens here, unorthodoxed tactics would be called for. Who knows? Maybe there might be a type of alien that would be vulnerable to swords? :D Anyway, just so you know, Japan, like China, is also beginning to issue swords to NCOs and COs across several services as well, so your Katana isn't out of place. You could say that swords are having a revival in the military, well, at least in Asia. ASEAN would have several countries doing that too, just that I haven't mentioned it yet until now. Everyone: It seems that things are going as planned. Once I get a few more CSes out of the way, we'll be able to start.