[quote=Eviledd1984]
Sorry but i am wondering if my guy is accepted?
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Calm down brother, I can't be on this website 24/7. I just got off work and am catching up on PMs and posts. 

As for your character, I'm still not really convinced. While I appreciate that you edited and cleaned up your writing from the first attempt, there's still no paragraph formatting, and it's still a really sparse, and to be frank, boring bio. Read through some of the other character bios. My character has an entire back story going back to his childhood. 

Dallas is an estranged NCR ranger looking for a lost love. Poe is essentially a living nightmare who happens to be a brilliant technician and explosives expert. Barnabus the Hunter Extraordinaire's bio wasn't long, but it was creatively done. Sweet Gin has [i]literally thousands of words[/i] in her backstory, and while I don't expect that, I need more than just a couple paragraphs. 

I'm not asking for anything crazy, but I want people involved who are going to put effort in their posts. If you can show me REAL effort and keep that writing level up, I'll reconsider, but as of right now, I'm gonna say no.