[quote=Grim327]
You'll have to forgive me for my unfinished work. I have no way to save my work right now, and have to go eat lunch. Will finished afterwards, though! In the meantime, could you tell me if my perks are ok? I'm unsure on the second one, wondering if it's too vague/OP. I'll let you guys be the judge of that. Anyway, be back after lunch!
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It seems fine. I'd probably go the opposite way and say rather than looking like everyone else, he's just skilled at blending with crowds. Just make sure to flesh out how he learned to do that in your bio.