[quote=IInflex] @Daemyn: It looks good. Accepted, though Id ask you to clean up your Skills section. It seems as though you've muddled up a bunch of unneeded personality traits in there. For example 'doesnt give up easily' and 'attention seeking and overbearing' are things that aren't really needed in that section. I understand that some personality traits can be a real advantage/disadvantage but I guess Im looking for more tangible things like being clumsy, bad at following procedures, poor memory, etc. Though, if youre lazy, you really dont neeeed to do this. :) [/quote] Yeah, I sorta threw anything in there that could qualify as something of the sort. It was late when I wrote it, so it got a little muddled. I'll clean it up before we start, but at the moment I have a headache so I'll do it when that clears up :3