ok, just two things

I personally feel that this truth ability of Mary should be included in her powers

and then the small matter of Shadow
in general he is good, I just wanted to discus his abilities a little towards the players.
His candle effect, is this permenant? can it be that at least the humans and others (if having a logical reason of some sort) have a resitence for this
cause trough its an interesting ability, I dont know how some people can work with it if they get their personality drained
so, basically, I want some more information about this powers working

his staff can Induce sleep into anything
at times I can understand that a player might not want this effect forced on them, so is it possible to fight against it if someone has a strong mind or something?

Nightmares: While I understand the thoughts about the insanity and killing them self effect of this, I take it, it will also depend on the person itself, some having a strong mind can take this much longer before the insanity starts happening, or even resist the dreams?

or would it be tthat his powers dont work on the humans or those close enough to the lights when they appeared or something?
or that he wont use them on the players (unless agreed by said player)?

just asking, you dont have to change his powers or anything, just wanting to know his extend as some people might not want their chars effected by some of these effects

beside all that I think their fine

ok one more thing trough
the thing that scattered their powers, were that the light event as well or something else?
cause I already have some idea's for the cause of the lights and such