[quote=GranoxFirewind]
Sweet holy fuck I had the worst time possible reading Tristain and Andrew talk. THIS IS WHY YOU SEPARATE NEW SPEAKERS INTO NEW PARAGRAPHS. I thought fucking Ginger was talking to me, until I realized Andrew was REFERRING to Ginger, without ever leaving the fucking PoV. LOOK AT THIS SHIT. THIS IMPLIES ANDREW WAS THE ONE WRECKING THE PUNCHING BAG. I'm sorry, and I'm taking that WAY out of proportion, but that entire paragraph was murder on my eyes to try and sort. Please fix.
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First of all, after rereading, that one line was a mistake and can see why. Plus, there was only one speaker as I don't make another player's character speak. Going on to insult the paragraph itself because of one single mistake about a miniscule conversation is just sad, man. Especially exploding like that and demanding me to fix it. Either get over it or at least try to act like a rational human being in the future instead of acting like a spoiled brat who's been told that he won't get to go to a sleepover.