[b]@Prometheus:[/b] So you pretty much put Varrick in the RP? Sweeeet. I am amused. *laces hands together*

The origin is fine by me! No worries there.

Nice creative use of magic, I was a bit weary of him doing water but hey, he's an old fart, that's totally fine by me. *nods*

The only thing I could ask you to tweak/change would be to try and spin his personality (as charming as he sounds *playful sarcasm*) a bit more...positively. You've pretty much hit it home that he's full of himself, cocky, charming, etc, but there's gotta be something that doesn't make everyone strangle him. Considering he's 31, has he ever had someone confront him about his larger than life persona? Is he friendly to people (even the lowly commoner folk?) as he will need to be able to work with people, he won't have to love them but and nor they love him but he should have some redeeming qualities, be it good with advice, able to charm his way out of a sticky situation or generous with his money? Etc. As I see most or er all of his traits as near negative, I'd just like to see some "good" things about him.

But really that's it, other than that it looks good to me!

[b]@JustAlice:[/b] Awesome! Lookin' forward to it.