[quote=Scallop]
Hey, is this still open?
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YUUUP 

@nonsequiter: Massive fan of the changes. It flows better, makes a lot more sense, and I love the addition of Christianity. Approved!
@demntedgrin: Still some minor things ;-; You havent exactly specified how long shes been in smile asylum, just that she's been thrown in there. Also a few grammar mistakes, and you can only have one trinket, not 2.
@Shiinen: No matter how many times I read over your power I can't understand it. Could you explain it to me? From what I can understand, it's overpowered. You can summon creautres, essentially go anywhere you want, and lock people away into the shadow zone? Maybe I just understood it wrong.