[quote=Shoopthewoop]
Ship Name: Thor's HammerDescription: Fast, Large, Has powerful guns. Low Defence, Not very luxurious. Population: 10kDescription: RussiaCaptain Name: Varennikov Borislav IlyichDescription: Born in Moscow, Varennikov is a member of the coup wanting to capture the planet. He was trained a Russian spy but after an injury he was forced to take another job. He became a cosmonaut as he always wanted to go to space. He became a spaceship driver and he led multiple Russian space missions. Other Notable Individuals:Anton Vasilev: General on the ship.Alexei Vasilev: Brother of Anton, Scientist.Deniska Vasilev: The other brother of Anton, repairer.Dominika Vasilev: Sister of Anton, she is the Co-Pilot.
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Sorry, but you can't be Russian. More detail is also necessary.

[quote=Kyelin]
Ship Name: Ljus of the FleetDescription: Being a vessel focused on scientific pursuits and engineering facilities, the ship has little to no defensive weapons or armor plating. However, it has a disproportionate number of scientists and engineers of various fields, and has specialized electronic warfare suites to aid it's high maneuverability in escapes and espionage.Population: 7 000 personnel on boardDescription: European descendants, largely from Sweden, Denmark and other nearby countries.Captain Name: VIlda S. AalbergDescription: Typical nordic features, but somewhat tall and slim, female. Short, blonde hair kept primarily in a bun. Is very open minded and values knowledge gained above all else.Other Notable Individuals:-Professor Adam J. Jakobsen, Head of the Scientific Affairs Board-Doctor Troed Eriiks, Head of the Xenobiology Research Division-Professor Emma Jonsson, Xenoarcheologist and assistant to Troed-Vice Captain Gunnar Winblad, maintains and directs the Engineering Division, as well as other critical systems.
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More detail.

I understand that I didn't have an example posted, but I would like to see the ship and captain description both be at least one paragraph. There's other areas where there is quite a lot of room for added content in both of these bios. I'll be starting my bio now, which may help in showing my expectations.