[quote=Pathfinder]
Got some things cleared up, but I'm having trouble expanding the background. Also I'm just going to put the whole lesbian thing on the back burners and not make it a big deal.
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You're right when you say that it's a bit difficult to find ways to expand the background, because I honestly can't come up with ways to expand it without writing it like I did; as if it was a real story. Anywho, I'd say that your character is fine as it is, and ready to be [b]Approved[/b]. That "thinks she might be lesbian" could be a fun thing to work on. I know that Lily will probably try teasing her about it from time to time if she catches wind of the possibility :p