[quote=Silverwind Blade]
Looks good to me - the only thing of note to mention is probably to drop the references to the UMP-45, Beretta M9, and the .50BMG as no real-world weapons exist in the setting. The weapons themselves are fine, of course. Regarding personal history, if you can just PM it to me, then that'll be fine - I prefer to have it for my own reference when I'm plotting and planning, so I can weave elements of peoples' backstories into things once things get moving a bit more and we get into the plot a bit more. Regarding Kitsune Peril being old too, I imagine it's probably a contemporary of the earlier models of my own GEAR, so alongside one another they're in the process of being phased out and replaced with newer models, slowly but surely, but still plenty of them in service. So yeah, if you edit the weapon descs and PM me over your personal history, I'll consider him to be approved.
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Weapon details have been altered, while small corrections to spelling, grammar and content errors have been made as well.

And yes, Kitsune Peril would be one of the more common GEARs. Also, I'm unsure if GEAR loadouts or weapons are exclusive to the characters the RPers choose to use. If not, I'd assume Arcade's chosen kit would be accessible to NPCs and players alike if desired, though the Aeon series of weapons are probably not very popular among pilots due to their greater weight and higher degree of risk as opposed to other weapon technologies.

Fun fact: I was also playing around with a light-gas rifle, autocannon variant that used HEAP/HEAT gyrojet cartridges and even some form of scramjet cannon (or something along those lines).

A lot of this stuff I borrow from actual real-world technologies, which I typically throw into my own sci-fi creations. 

I'll be sending the history bit sometime later today.