I'm sorry, but honestly, I cannot bend my own rules just because you are great at walls of text. Maximum of 2 characters per person.

Harin, could you please explain what the use of your artifact is? also, your character seems a bit over equipped. He doesn't need to bring an entire arsenal to a school that is relatively safe. You also seemed to have removed Personality. That is not optional. You can keep it basic, but you can't remove it completely