[quote=TurboTuber] I enjoy that 2/3 of that name is comprised of New Phyrexia praetors. [/quote] Wot m8? Who are you? WHERE DID YOU COME FROM, WHO SENT YOU!? Just kidding, you staying or just looking around? [quote=Lucius Cypher] Name: Karnage Urabrask Vorinclex [/quote] Oh lord, where to even start... Let's start with balance. 1. What is his weakness? Whatever it is it must be obvious and readily available to counteract that kind of strength. A good rule of thumb is that any PC should be able to have an equal chance beating any other in one on one combat. Some suggestions might be vulnerable to magic, or poorly suited to fighting tech-based foes, or what have you. If you go with a magic weakness, I recommend an intolerance to lightning or wind, as those are more effective against earth. 2. A clarification: No, sadly Demonomancy is not a thing here, his powers wouldn't work. Especially since demons/devils are actual creatures of flesh and blood rather than manifestations of emotion or what-have-you. Does he require his magic for continued existence in his natural state? If he does, he would die if he were to be freed from the tree. Onto other things... 3. Evil is not tolerated here as it is in Tiien. 'For the greater good' is not a concept that is popular around here, and it is extremely unlikely that Karnage would get away with slaughtering random people. For example for her actions Lucilia would be executed as a mass murderer. 4. There can't be multiple Karnages. I only care for 'multiverse' things if each dimension is radically different. 5. The important thing is that he basically has to be on par with everyone else as far as power goes.