Hey Laughing Matter, welcome to this roleplay! I am your lovely GM and I hope you'll have a lovely time~
I don't see anything wrong with your char besides for the fact that your second and third Etra seem a bit more like combt magic, but I'm assuming you'll use your gauntlets to use those two Etras which in that case they'll be fine. Go ahead and post in the character bin, and look into setting up a relationship sheet!

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Hiya Laughing Matter! Neat character. :)And you guys will be happy to know that I'm a paragraph away from submitting my IC post! Just PM'd Mizuho though, currently waiting for her to respond to a question I had before finishing up my IC!
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[s]I will never reply because I want this roleplay to crash and burn[/s] I'll reply after I write up the opening IC post for another roleplay I'm GMing and hopefully revive it a bit...

So I'm on my iPod so it's kinda hard to type, but I think I'll make a post after some AP English homework about everything that I've been thinking of for the planet of Zenith. You guys can be like nay or yay. But I wouldn't see why you woul disagree with anything.