Oh man! Just as it was picking up the chapter ended! :(

So far, I really like how you write and that opening scene was genuinely touching! I think a bit more fleshing out of the world and what exactly the team is about will come, but I felt like I could have used more of an idea of what the world's like and what everyone has in common, perhaps a bit of insight about each character from the protag's POV. It also kind of felt like the chapter cut off at a really odd point, as it went from preparation to the first minutes of deployment and then ended. I think it wouldn't be as jarring if you either wrote to a bit of a cliff hanger or stopped just before they deployed. Overall, really fun so far and I am a fan of this digestable format! I really wantto see where this goes. :)