[quote=No Bite and All Bark] You tricky one, you....(Btw, loved the detail of the horses breath, nice touch!) [/quote] -wipes a tear from the corner of her eye- Why thank you, I do try... Heheh, I like writing fiction and I've done a professional writing and editing course, plus almost eight years of roleplaying under my belt, detailing is kinda my thing xDD