[quote=Raen Elvarasi] Did you read the History by any chance? Looking for critique as I mess with it. [/quote] Honestly? Okay, umm... Why does everyone beat the shit out of your character? Like, its one thing to have bullies and tragedies and abusive parents and so on, but like, literally everyone? How did nine year old girl survive, eating her own scars? :lol Idk I found that weird.