You should probably put your sheet in the character deposite. That's where Allen has us all put ours when he judges them. You might also want to talk to him about your chracrer's power since in one of the rules it sais that while powers dont have to obey every law set in place they do have to make sense. I dont know his definition of sense is, but you might want to look into it. Just a few thoughts! The rest looks good though!