[quote=CommissarRanden]
POSTED! Good or Bad? Interesting or Boring?
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Looks good, man! There's only one thing that [i]I[/i] would change (which means you don't have to) is;

[quote=CommissarRanden]
Chrislann [U]was traveling[/U] in in his normal attire but with sunglasses as he [U] didn't[/U] want anybody to know it was him.
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That would help maintain the flow of your post by keeping it in third person(?) perspective instead of suddenly switching to first person.