Feb: That CS was perfectly done (though we have wait to see on the equipment) Playing the technologically advanced survivalist in the group, I welcome his primitive counter part. I don't see it as a direct encroachment onto his role as a survivalist, but more of a cohesion that can prove interesting withing the roleplay.

Since I am in the (incredibly slow) process of converting everything to a google doc. (Haven't had a hell of a lot of time to do that, but I will) I'd be willing to give you the Khu'lu faction, as in creatively, but only if you want it. I will have a Faction CS up thursday. Otherwise I will rewrite it and make sure it fits with your shaman, but if you had a certain vision I'm willing to give you the creative freedom with them. As reap will do with something she is thinking up. (Unfortunately Fire if you're reading this, The Silver Hand I have grand schemes for and cannot release their custody. They will be a part of the main storyline eventually, and it will be important.)
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Snow: I've never been one to lie. The biggest differences I see between casual and advanced players are the time they take to flesh out their writing. What do you think when you make that decision to time-line skip up to this point, and look back on the single paragraph you have? The biography is supposed to be meaningful information to help us understand your vision of a character. You started when she was child, did nothing else happen during her life to affect the out come of her development as a person? What's the inbetween, I want the story when she was 7 and the cat tied to kill her. I want tales of her time in the wild, how it shaped her as a person, how it molded her. I want the in-between.

Just so you are warned. At no point in this roleplay will I accept less than two paragraphs. That being said, you're CS was not half bad. Lacking in the bio, the gear could use some updating but we'll get to that. What I want write now is for you to show me that you want to be here, that you're willing to put in the effort to advanced yourself creatively when you write. If you can show me that through the biography, then we will work our the rest of the minor kinks and get you over to the IC.

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It is 5.am and I am going to bed. I will check up tomorrow if I can, my lady is coming down and we have things to take care of, so Thursday at the latest.

Final decisions will be made when I return.