Might also be worthwhile to touch up on the factions a bit so that you're not solely going off of what you copypasted from me. Make it seem more like that's what things are rather than what I think things should be like in my brainstorming with you. So for example, instead of "The Nazi skinheads would probably be disorganized and scattered all along the Red Line running from Farragut North to Shady Grove.", you'd rewrite that as "The Nazi skinheads are disorganized and scattered all along the Red Line running from Farragut North to Shady Grove."

I've also got a character in mind for this now. A psychopathic Australian midget.