[quote=Leonerdo]
It looks to me like an acceptable addition to your power, but I am not a co-mod, so that isn't up to me.However, the problem I would personally find in it is that you added a power to your character after having already established and agreed to the parameters that were previously set. It isn't really a problem, per se, since it has never actually been used in-character and so on and so forth. I would simply suggest talking it over with the owner or assigned moderaters before any actual changes were made. The sheet essentially documentation of the accepted character; no harm is done though, it's just future advice.
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I only added it because, as explained to Allen via PM, Red's power didn't have any room for improvement, thus missing the point of visiting the Academy at all. I didn;t think of that initially, but, what-the-hell, more ideas should come up as long as we play right? Besides, I wrote it in the CS so that it would be visible by either a GM or a Co and, if rejected, I will erase it immediately. As I said before, I am still an amateur when it comes to RPing, so I still have many things to learn. But I am really grateful for your advice Leo. Thanks! :D