[quote=Kestrel]
Write two paragraphs and use a spellcheck.
Advanced unlocked.
[/quote]

This... all this, seriously.
Sure some gms want more than the official 2 paragraph minimum but many are content if 2 is all there is. To be quite honest though if you think about your posts and put a fair amount of effort in as it sounds like you do already then you shouldnt have any trouble in advanced, it really isn't the death-trap a lot of people think it is.