I'm on my phone right now, so I can't be hassled to mess with quotes:

Geoffrey: I'll PM you with writing tips, if you'd like. 

Card Captor: if you wanted, you could introduce a second NPC Honedge that you join with to evolve, the same way that Slownro and Shellder become Slowbro or how Magnemite become Magneton. Alternatively, you could just make the second sword an extension of yourself. It's up to you, really. 

To Everyone: I'll have another post up once the last one or two of you post. I don't quite remember who has posted and who hasn't, but I'm pretty sure almost everyone has.