[quote=Lo Pellegrino] @Sifter: I completely agree with Wired. You need more meat in the background, it seems like you're more interested in playing a general soldier than actual character development based on what I see here. I don't need to know about your weapons as they'd be standard issue if he were on-duty. If he's returning to his family off-duty he would not have an automatic rifle, so it keeps things pretty simple. Give more detail into his personality, his background, and what makes this guy tick. Until then I cannot accept the character.@Wired: Will you be coming into the Vancouver-Portland Metro area or sticking far, far away from other characters? [/quote] Thats because as I should have already mentioned, this is a work in progress. Think I did not choose the Chinese Vietnam for a reason? I am basing him off [url=http://fallout.wikia.com/wiki/Randall_Clark]Randall Clark[/url] and [url=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=915FESKzjWM]Martin Walker[/url], whom ran on their revenge fantasies while hign on PTSD.