[quote=Aweena] Alright, let me know if you want her to join up with them. Speaking of IC posts, I'm going to start my first one soon. It'll be up in the Main Doc if you (or anyone else) wants to join in. , just read through the CS. It's good, and I saw nothing wrong with it. The length isn't really that much of a problem since it was written greatly. I'm sort of thinking now you're going to end up bringing Coltrane's brother into the mix sometime down the line. Plot twist, he survived and has been looking for Coltrane all these years! [/quote] Yeah I'm going to admit that the idea of Coltrane's brother becoming a character has crossed my mind a couple times, but given the circumstances that he knew Coltrane ere in he'd have assumed him to be dead and given that the parted on bad terms, its unlikely that he'd be looking for hin if we're being realistic. Also its been a while so he might not recognise his appearance straight up.