[quote=The Irish Tree] Seems good so far, but I gotta know: Can she move People, or their weapons with her Semblance? [/quote] People but she would need to put in fairly large amount of aura to move them. As for weapons, would it be OP to move them because I feel inclined to do so since I dont want her to get of as OP. [quote=Lugubrious] Here you are, Shadow.You get one remake free of charge. The charge for a hypothetical second remake is "I won't do it unless it's a really small detail."Do you have any sort of idea in mind? Even something simple as 'sharp-looking' really helps. Otherwise I must reach once again into the uncertainty called 'creative liberty.' [/quote] Huh, I was expecting it to be an anime-ish drawing. But I like it and the emblem. Could you make it more anime-ish and make her look younger, and reduce the height to 5"1.