Phoenix, that's a nice start, but I'd like to see that a character is a bit more developed before accepting the CS. It looks like "Milo" is a recurring character of yours, and I just want to ensure that you've made him unique to [i]this[/i] story and have thought about a history for him. Also, if we could have a bit more insight into his personality, you know - what makes him tick, that would be great.