[quote=grimdarkenigma] 1,200 words in this one. Not bad but I've got longer one's on me of that I'm sure. Hope you guys like. [/quote] The last part with Crashing was rather effective - I could see the the darkness in his eyes and the gravitas when he spoke those words. It captured a force of nature ready to strike. Nice :) [quote=EldritchOne] And so Herr Dok shows what accumulates when he settles down for some considerable amount of time, like a big show off. Also we get some world building and nods! woo! Not to mention the subtle reference to my most cherished Lovecraft story. Anyhoo, enjoy. [/quote] Yeah, I tossed in a few Mythos shout outs in the previous posts myself. I also enjoyed the newest entry, reminding me of walking through an ancient library. very cool :D