[quote=Ellri] We'll throw ya some critique.One, this world is medieval fantasy. Where does non-medieval technology into that?Also, relics pick people, not people pick relics.One more thing: Those mountains are deep within imperial territory. Anyone residing there would not be left to their own devices. If they're as skilled at mathematics as you profess, they would have been used by the Kalesian empire. [/quote] Fair enough on all points. I need to head off for a while relatively soon, but I'll see if I can get those edits in prior~ --- Edited~, though I'm not 100% on if the new location works or not, so let me know~ Thankfully those changes were largely semantic and easy to implement, seeing as no change to the core needed to be made