[quote=UnendingEmpire]
I've got a fair few problems with this one, to be totally honest. Were it not for these, I'd actually be all sorts of fine with Kaori.> British but with a Japanese name. No explanation.> Also no explaining how she got to Japan in the first place. We don't do apprentices.I can certainly see effort though, and that's a good starting point no matter what my issues with your character is :)
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Sorry was in a rush when i wrote this and I was supposed to change location:/ will edit this now!