@Charter
Many parts of your CS are good, however the CS needs more detail. The bio doesn't exactly state how he got to the situation he is in now, etc. Also, your CS has multiple spelling mistakes. That's a minor issue, but can be irritating at times, so please try to proof-read your post.
One thing that both me and Monster picked up on was the fact that Daniel randomly got made a battle suit. It's understandable why he was made the [i]life[/i]-suit, but why would Dr Cold make him a battle-suit?