It's better than it was before, but let me give you some criticism.

Every God was there at the creation, only some not in the form they are now. So there is really no meaning in calling yourself an older god. 

What has the animal Dragon to do with your god? Something like a mountain ram would fit more. 

No one has yet done anything with dwarves, this is a great opportunity for your god. Maybe focus more on that and less on the earth shaper thing. It's great to sound all powerful, but that puts a barrier between you and the common folk. Don't get me wrong, you could still be the creator of mountains. Allow your god to have mistakes and a need to rely on other gods. That makes interaction a whole lot easier and creates a way more interesting story.

Also I don't get the torch as symbol, why not just a diamond in a stone/rock. Seems more symbolic for the feeling you want to give to your god.