[quote=Maki Casanova] ఠ_ఠ Ellri, Are you really challenging me to put cheese here?All right, I can make adjustments for the back story and motivation, that's fine with me. I'm really having trouble getting a more solid motivation in. ಹ_ಹ Also, do you really want me to explain exactly how he joined, in detail? Like how he came to be accepted? [/quote] Well... I must say that you have one of the better motivations, for my characters: Marcus' motivation is basically "survive" and Numiel basically seeks to enjoy herself :')