I'm still a bit...unsure if we're seeing eye to eye just yet, though it is 1:30 AM, I still feel a bit apprehensive. I'm trying to pinpoint why. I know I don't want people going to one far side of the spectrum with massive godmod spells and attributes but at the same time, you do have to prove yourself useful to the ragtag group of explorers and earn a spot as a useful member of the group. It just seems at his young age, to have such a grasp of mental ability to the extent you're aiming for is a bit...of a stretch. And their uses are somewhat limited and unconventional in the sense that the action happens where people can't see. (mind control) And it's a risk as a GM to let characters with such a wild card "spell" I know Rayn Night has a similar idea but they have limitations and a solid backstory to back theirs up. I do like your character's origin and backstory but I'm just concerned about the abilities they have and the age as well. I think even if the age was increased, I'd still be weary. Can't find a picture? Fine whatever, I get people have an image they can't quite pin point visually but it would have been cool of you to at least try. I mean anyone and everyone will write their appearance throughout the RP, I just figure it would help to have a reference to glance at when it comes to linking a character's name with a general appearance when it comes to writing and first meeting everyone.