[quote=Krypteia] Whoever ends up doing The Templar, we should probably talk, as I included him a little in my bio. I can always edit that if you want to work out something specific. Anyway, here's my CS, I hope you like her. [/quote] It looks good but just a few things I forgot to mention. Not your fault. Sisters are actually strictly forbidden from romance and having children. The Sisterhood views one needs to be absolutely pure to follow the Goddess. Breaking this leads to death if discovered. ( of course, your character is free to risk this, just part if the world culture) And the healing art is a rare gift to sisters, so you aren't incorrect she would fly passed other Sisters. Those with healing do move up faster. And thank you for the reaction she will have to the plague (so far they've only heard rumors until they are hit) it will help with the intro set up post. I'd prefer her to just have leather and robes instead of chainmail. Other than that, she's good ^^