[quote=Leidenschaft] Perhaps they've become a UNSC like dictatorship after years of them being an untrustworthy arm of the government. Military coup or a slow takeover through multiple elections being in their favor. SPACE-POLITICS! [/quote] Yeah :sun I thought a slow takeover would be interesting. Shading it from the public eye whilst quietly gaining the support of politicians and parties etc. I like space politics. :rollin Ooh wow, nice faction Sauron! I think we can accept that, there are a few things we need to revise though. Firstly with your character, he's overpowered. He can't be three meters tall to start off with, that's almost 10 feet tall! He's also a tiny bit too old. Humanity has greatly increased their lifespan but 353 isn't consistent with the improvements. Take one hundred years off that age and it's just about okay. :sun Secondly, there are some very tall towers in Babylon. On the outskirts the buildings are relatively low down by comparison and a massive tower out there would cause massive suspicion. Could we not make it a little more inconspicuous? Maybe knock off a couple of floors and such? Underground facilities are okay up to a point but there may or may not be something else under the ground which could interfere with it. :hehe Lastly, could you explain in a bit more detail, Arthur's motive for changing the Order's ideology to worship death? Either on the thread or in PMs if its important that it remains a secret. Just want to know so i can work some bits and pieces around it. It's perfectly alright, i was hoping for some goals more economically or politically minded because i was thinking about having them be a contender for a hostile takeover. :newlol