[quote=Eviledd1984]
Background: Sirga was born on Tatooine being born into a farming family but where murdered by some bandits when he was 8 years old.So he started wandering into Mos Eisley meeting a old jedi named Ishmael who taught him on the planet Endor for 10 years.When he was 20 he returned to Tatooine to become a bounty hunter for Jabba by leaving the council for not unknown reasons but most likely leaved to earn a money.So for another 3 years he with his partner Terra hunted down people for Jabba even chasing and failing to nab Han Solo.He also had a friendly rivalry with Bobba Fett.Reason for Joining the Empire/Alliance: Doesn't want to join either.
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I'm going to put my full on GM hat on right now and go at this a bit at a time, Ignoring everything else as that's decent (Hard to mess it up) I'm going to focus on the history you have given me.

[quote=Evil]
Sirga was born on Tatooine being born into a farming family[/quote] 

I like that bit.

[quote=Evil]
but where murdered by some bandits when he was 8 years old[/quote]

Cliché but I can deal with it. How did he survive though?

[quote=Evil]
 meeting a old jedi named Ishmael[/quote]

How did he know he was a Jedi? 

[quote=Evil]
who taught him on the planet Endor for 10 years[/quote]
a) How did they get to Endor?
b) LolNope. On the original post "No Jedi" I would have thought that would indicate no other force users but I'll go clear that up.

[quote=Evil]
When he was 20 he returned to Tatooine to become a bounty hunter for Jabba[/quote]

Okay. This is okay.

[quote=Evil]
 leaving the council for not unknown reasons but most likely leaved to earn a money.[/quote]

What Council? The Jedi Council? There is no Jedi Council.

[quote=Evil]
chasing and failing to nab Han Solo[/quote]

Han Solo wasn't wanted by Jabba until after 2BBY, we're in 5BBY.

[quote=Evil]
e also had a friendly rivalry with Bobba Fett.[/quote]

Boba Fett wasn't really friendly with anyone.

If you manage to fix all this, maybe make it a bit longer and then find a reason for you to be on Belona. S'all good. But right now, it's a lolnope.