I'm trying to get a feel for how you like to pace character development.

Should I slow down the pace of some of these scenes to get in a lot of dialogue between the two characters? (For instance, should we have RP'd conversation between Kiara and Lamont as he showed her around the castle?) Or is the current pace and generic narration through some of the scenes appropriate?

This way, I'll gain a better grasp of the upcoming scene in the city, which I have a few mild plans for :)