[quote=Lillian Thorne]
Very nice, I like it. However there is one problem, one of the . Is there another role you could cast the father in? Plus names for relatives are helpful since everyone will know each other.
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I changed it to woodworker, if that's convenient enough. I felt like having a blacksmith as an NPC father was becoming a bit generic for my taste but either way, this is fiction. ;)