[quote=Kiddo]
Well then I guess somebody's got to change the timing in their post TT^TT
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:'( i'd have to rewrite that entire post, everything in it was meant to hint at things relevant to Avis' character.. Besides, i'd also have to rewrite mt second post, which i also wrote to have the same effect T_T

Especially the time, as i had intend to use to demonsrate both his how much he cared about Dallas, as well highlight his diligence. - He left home to stay at his girlfriends house, because his house was too far and he wanted to see his friend Asap (hence the bus trip at the start). Kinda spent alot of time thinking out my first two posts. So they're intimately linked. Not to say you each havent as well, but your posts just seem to be more flexible...

Edit: @Frozen: So true, but its more the not wanted to rewrite the two large posts i already spend days thinking about.