I can understand the confusion reading the post, just a suggestion if you wish to write a response to what he wrote.
I think that would help build the story between the two of them, maybe he could take the injured Jin to Tuck.
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If you would like any suggestions for progress I'd be happy to help; I love helping people grow as writers, especially if they're willing to return the favor!
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Or if I'm being too aggressive you could say "Shut up Melly" and I'd understand and not be offended.
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