[quote=Ink Blood]
Sorry for the lack of a post so far, Lo. I will try and have one uo later tonight or tomorrow.
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I will be posting the next IC tonight. Consider that a gentle nudge ;).

[quote=Phoenix]
I don't really know what else to add. I'd really just reiterate what's already been written in greater (and arguably irrelevant) detail. Do you want me to write a kind of story depicting his everyday life? It won't even be longer than the Brief History due to the nature of his life, which is relatively uneventful outside of what I alluded to already.

Let me know what you're looking for so I can accommodate.[/quote]

First, pointing out that there may be quite a bit of fluff already should not be how you sell this to me -- not being mean, just saying. The CS should have a background and a Brief History, right now it looks like you dumped it all in the Brief and did nothing in the Background. Both have a purpose, both are necessary for me to properly check out your character and provide real feedback. Basically, please follow the CS's instructions.