Reviewing the two apps I can't help but feel that some folk seem to be under the impression equipment like siege towers are something you keep standing around like you might a modern-day tank and that most equipment is most likely to be assembled at the field when it's needed as opposed to being kept around somewhere, like battering rams. More often stuff like siege towers at the least are built when they're needed, at the siege where they're needed, and most likely rams too. Seeing them included in the official dossier of Frontliner's army sort of annoyed me.

That aside, I didn't really notice anything that felt off about Frontliner's.

As per TwistedSun, what got me more was more the critic in me than anything else. Chivalry is not synonymous with "cavalry", and it's spelled "agriculture". That aside, I'm feeling wary on the almost mary-sue tier, physically perfect race of angel-people (furry wings too? Those better just be vestigial). And apart from the magic, which I brought up in my last post: I feel it's best to let OP have the final say. So we could fly be the assumption that it doesn't exist for now and leave it in the app, but never invoke it in IC until Feigling comes back from Spain, or you could wait for Feigling to come back to review your application himself and give the final say.

Also that damn Assassin's Creed flag.