[quote=Dinh AaronMk]
As per TwistedSun, what got me more was more the critic in me than anything else. Chivalry is not synonymous with "cavalry", and it's spelled "agriculture". That aside, I'm feeling wary on the almost mary-sue tier, physically perfect race of angel-people (furry wings too? Those better just be vestigial). And apart from the magic, which I brought up in my last post: I feel it's best to let OP have the final say. So we could fly be the assumption that it doesn't exist for now and leave it in the app, but never invoke it in IC until Feigling comes back from Spain, or you could wait for Feigling to come back to review your application himself and give the final say.Also that damn Assassin's Creed flag.
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Leaving aside errors, which can occur even to any native english speaker (or writer), would you try to specify? What do you exactly intend for 'Mary Sue'? Where did i mention physical perfection? I'd like more constructive criticism, if possible.
About the wings: If i understood correctly what you meant, haven't I in fact said that those are remnants made of [b]fur[/b], of the original feathered ones?
About magic: is there a specific reason why it is so vehemently denied?
About the flag: It's the best looking and fitting i found on the web >.>