Yea sorry, when I created this I had a great layout in my head. But when It came time to putting it together I couldn't think of a single thing. But i was thinking you wouldn't be completely soverign but you could still make your own laws. Similar to a state which the King is the federal government and the state is you. Also I updated the story. Adding a little too it. I'm making the king more of a tyrant who means good but goes about it wrong. feel free to re-read it. Name: Abast Reylds Age: 53 Description: Despite age he looks quite young, He its tall, and handsome, his body is still well muscled from his younger days. He has long blond hair with a mustache and goatee. In the later years he has been seen as a womanizer after his first and second wives failed to give him born mages he has recently been sleeping with almost any Lady of magic birth to give him a heir. With the womanizing he has slowly become more and more brutal, raising taxes on the non-mages, he has been for no explained reason finding those who can bond people with magic and throwing them into the dungeon. He has formed three massive labor camps for the fallen kingdoms where he works their inhabitants to death. His mind has grown dark and his power becoming over bearing. Rank: King Magic ability: Ability to manipulate peoples wills through his words. Weapons: None. Nation: Kingdom of Verset Banner: [IMG]http://i61.tinypic.com/etwbwj.png[/IMG] Castle: A massive castle which stands at the center of the kingdom. It rises into the sky each section of castle taller than the lest with the cetner being a massive tower that stands over the city. Lands: The city streatches so far that what little lands there are, are made up of solely farmlands to feed the massive city. The city Orthag is fed through tributes and leavies from the surrounding fiefs. Specialty: Ruling, at somepoint all nobles have lived in Orthag. Military: The military is vast, and well trained. The soldiers are professional and have tutors and trainers from around the country. There are Mage knights, Bonded soldiers and the regular military where it takes a minimum of four years of training before a candidate is eligible to join the ranks. The military is very well rounded and seen as the pinocle of military power. Culture: The culture varies due to the mass amounts of immigrants and emigrants. Other: