[quote=Kurai Assassin]
Name: Kirin DalaSpecies: MandalorianGender: FemaleAffiliation: RebellionAppearance: without helmet: with helmet: Equipment:Main:Secondry:Melee:Background: Kirin's story begins during the Dark times for the mandalorians. the Empire had occupied Mandalore with a garrison of Stormtroompers and officers. the Mand'alor at the time Fen Shysa and the mandalorian protectors fought against the Imperial occupation for close to twenty years. She was one of the protectors. Shysa had seen a vessel orbiting mandalore and sent a recon team including Kirin to check it out for suspicious activity.When they arrived it was a Terrible Disaster. first of all it was the Leviathan, a sith vessel used in the mandalorian wars. it sent chills up the squads spines just thinking of the evil powers of Revan being aboard the ship all them years ago. Second of all there was a silence on the ship. not a calm silence but an eerie silence like someone was watching you. then it happend there was a gigantic explosion and the top of the Bridge flew off into space dragging 2 of the squad out due to air pressure. the people left inside activated there Gravity boots. Kirin had slightly learned to pilot but never really understood it but she was still the most qualified. She grabbed the control pannel and steered it towards Mandalor. few minutes had passed when it landed on Mandalor, more of a Smash into mandalor. no one had survived apart from Kirin. when Shysa had finally finished the battle he was in he spoke to Kirin, telling of places that needed here more than mandalor. she had shown a good survival trait of being able to get out of the crash alive. He told her to lie low maybe work for jabba the hut for a bit of cash and gather intel on a so called Rebellion and if enough intel is gathered to join there ranks and destroy them. she worked for jabba for 4 months before over hearing a conversation between 2 men talking about the rebellion and saying that there would be a meeting in the mos eisely cantina later on that day for people looking to join. of course Kirin could never miss the opportunity to join and went to the meeting. afterwards they people attending were given Co-ordinates and told to meet there for training and introduction. she left mos eisly that day and went to the Co-ordinates. the Co-ordinates led to Yavin IV. when she got close the Coms sprang into life. "The meeting at the mos eisly Cantina brought me here" she replied said the voice "27657" she said quickly trying not to get the numbers mixed up. . as she landed she was surrounded by officers ushering her to test if she needed basic training. which she didnt. now part of the Rebellion she will destroy the Empire, one garrison at a time.Reason for Joining the Empire/Alliance: The Empire had Occupied mandalor and capture many of the mandalorian soldiers
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I'm still seeing issues. I'll point them out to you in fairness but at this point I'm saying no to this entire character.

1- So first he "Saw" a vessel orbiting Mandalore? Where did it come from? Why didn't the Imperials go for it? If it was a trap how comes it wasn't obvious to Shysa that it was a trap?
2-The Imperial Occupation on Mandalore never really ended until after the Emperors death. I mean if the Mandalorians kicked off the Garrison with as valuable resource as Mandalorian Iron available 
3- Why does Shysa want you to join the Rebellion?
4- Why does Shysa want you to destroy the Rebellion?
5- Why would rebels recruit so openly?
6- Why would they trust you on sight?
7- Why would they then lead you to one of their main bases without any proof that you weren't an Imperial(And for reference Yavin IV wasn't used until nearer 0ABY)
8- Why did you then decide not to destroy the rebellion?

There shouldn't be any real questions after reading a CS, not ones with such gaps. I mean I can maybe give you 3/4 away to being a secret.